From: (No Email available)

Date: 2001-09-20 06:33:47

Comment:

Website Evaluation

The first thing that struck me was the repetitive style of the website and lack of colour. The whole site was not eye-catching and badly laid out. The amount of space wasted for the huge space between paragraphs and new headings could have been used for pictures of Veronica Witty and her works. The diagram of Enneagram was nice, but not explained at all. I thought the drawing in the background was good, until I saw that the photo of the swan. I now know all it is the photo modified in PhotoShop. That gives me the impression that this website was a rush job and this backed up by the fact that the whole website is one page. The supposedly links are nothing, but bookmarks from word. This is not a website, this is word document put on a website. The website is supposedly to be about Veronica Witty, so how come there is no hyper links to her companies. Even worse where are the photos of her? If she is so famous there must be pictures! If there was interested in going to the courses, the only way they contact them is by email! Some people might not like using email, maybe they would prefer to use a telephone or post to find out more.

To make this site better, it must be redesigned. To make it more eye-catching, why not vary the font styles and colours. Give clearer explanations about enneagram and other things. Put the website on different pages, this makes the site look less word-full. There should be more visuals aids, such as pictures of Veronica Witty and her works, companies etc. explain why there is a massive swan on the website, because I can?t find a reason why there should be one there. The background also needs changing, as its bland and looks rushed because of the way it?s done (through PhotoShop!). Change the background to an animated GIF of swan flying, that would look much better. There should be links to other websites that are of a similar subject.

This is my evaluation, my personally opinion. If you wondering why I given your website, such a bad review, its because of your website. That is why I have given a few suggestions on how to improve it.

Steven Pike
14/09/01
PS If you want to give me feedback here is my email address
S_pikehotmail.com
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